Gone Away ~ The journal of Clive Allen in America

Okay, I Admit I Had a Childhood
14/12/2004

(This is the first of a series of posts that I wrote concerning childhood memories of Africa. There is a link to the next at the end of the article.)

It rained in the night. Heavy, African rain that drummed on the roof and tapped on the windows, filling the world with sound. Lightning flashed for seconds on end and made glowing squares of the drawn curtains, the darkness even blacker in the aftermath. Thunder rattled the window frames.

The boy in the bed slept soundly through it all. And, by his side, the red dog snored softly to himself.

In the morning, the bright, sharp morning, two streams still ran along the upper arms of the U-shaped dirt driveway, meeting in a bow lake where the drive widened before the house. The boy ran out to the new, damp morning.

The lake was as it always was, its shape etched in his memory, the maps he'd drawn confirming once again this miracle of the first rains, the rebirth of his faraway country. Slowly he followed the southern shore of the lake, savoring the delight of favorite inlets, memorized bays and villages nestling in the surrounding uplands. Out on the open water tiny ships and boats moved soundlessly across the lake, trading, traveling, trawling. The sun beat down on the boy's back as he crouched to see more.

Here at the southeastern edge of the lake, a river flowed out across the stones and mud of the driveway. And, in an inlet close by, a town dipped its feet in the water and drew the traffic of the lake to its welcome. Smaller boats set out to brave the rough waters of the river in its stony passage to the south.

The boy traced the route of the river now, noting each twist of its course as it battled through rocks and rapids. Through the carport it ran, hurrying now as the slope urged it on. Out through the gap in the wall the river continued and then suddenly slowed, a new country opening before it. Here it skirted the open plain of the back lawn and arrived, at last, at the ford.

The ford was a magical place. The river broadened and became sluggish, its bed rough with tiny stones. And here it was possible to cross on foot or on horseback. Here too the boats that had braved the rapids were forced to stop and unload their cargoes. And so a small town had grown up at this meeting of the ways, where water and highway clasped hands.

The road went west from here, over the grassy plains, to disappear in the mountains of Back Door. On the other side of the ford it climbed up to the rocky slopes of the Eastern Hills, then bent northward to come in the end to the lake.

Beyond the ford the river continued, quickly at first, but gradually slowing, until it lost itself in the swamps of the orchard. Here, under the dripping trees, lay the land of eternal rain, the land of unknown tribes, glimpsed sometimes in the fog and humidity that lay always thick upon the face of that country.

The boy turned and followed the river back to the lake, followed one of its feeder streams to the road, and left the land, the grim chore of school now uppermost in his mind. But the rains had come. For two months now they would feed the land, keeping the lake full and the rivers flowing. And the map in the boy's head would grow daily as he etched in new details, new lands, new peoples.

The red dog still snored peacefully on the boy's bed.

(to read the second African Memories article, click here)

Clive

Hannah
Ned's comments have inspired you, I see :P
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Harry
Now who's finding gems? Mas, there is something about rain, something about childhood, some things about life that should not go untold, and I can only give thanks to the ones that dare. Those are wondrously drawn images, Sir Gone.
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Ned
I was about to blog something, and now I can't. I am unworthy. Just lovely. Really.
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Gone Away
Actually, I just wanted to see for myself if I could do it, Owl. Remeniscence really isn't my style. And I was such a weird kid, you really wouldn't want to know. But the red dog in there is different; yes, I just might attempt a few pieces about Rufus... I'll ask Mad to do something about the double comment, by the way. You really must learn to trust his coding. ;)
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Gone Away
Thank you kindly, Mr Way. Coming from you, those words are high praise indeed.
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Gone Away
Ned, don't be silly. To work, young lady, to work!
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Mad
Yeah! Give us more Rufus stories. I've always loved stories of that most infamous of English Bull Terriers. In fact I'm told that still to this day wherever African dogs gather in the night and tell tall stories that mention is made of a red Bully and his exploits...
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Gone Away
Tall stories? Nah, Mad, every single one of them was true...
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Mad
I said the Dogs were telling tall stories, not you...
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Judy
Some good memories of good old Africa, and that dog, well he was one of a kind.
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Gone Away
Hi Judy and welcome to the world of comments! I thought this piece might stir you to action. ;)
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Gregory
Hey, thanks for stopping by and looking at my blog. I am kind of new to the whole blog thing, but it seems to be catching my attention, especially when I'm bored at work.
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Gone Away
What better time to blog? I'm pretty new to this myself, Gregory, but it seems to be an outlet I was needing. Blog on, sir, say I, blog on!
Date Added: 14/12/2004

Wayne Shannon
I'm way behind the drag curve here, reading your old stuff, but it's all still new to me, and I'm gonna keep reading it, if I may. I'm a huge fan of African writing and my all time favorites are Herman Charles Bosman and JM Coetzee. They both successfully capture the essence of what it is in Africa that captured me. Durban is my home town. But I've sold out to a life of security for my kids. Who knows . . . maybe, someday . . . Thanks for your visit.
Date Added: 25/11/2007

Clive
Only just discovered your comment, Wayne, and it reminds me that I never did get back to you about that writing thing you were doing. I blame it on the "busyness" of life - especially at this time of Christmas cheer and so on. Your all time favourites are unbelievably good writers and deserve to be much better known in the outside world. There is something about Afrikaans writers that creates an atmosphere almost tangible, a world that is Africa and yet somehow so much more. I can only hope that their qualities are catching and that this old Englishman caught at least a touch of the disease in reading them!
Date Added: 27/12/2007

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